5 Paragraph Essay About Your Hero
The word hero means someone who has made great achievements in life and thus admired by people. It is a word that is used so much in the modern times. When one thinks of the word hero, what comes to my mind is someone who has gone out of his her ways to accomplish certain missions, tasks or challenges in life successfully. Some of the general admirable qualities that one can possess are bravery, courageousness, trustworthiness and reliability. A hero is not necessarily someone you know personally. It could be a celebrity, freedom fighter, footballer or even an athlete. These individuals possess special attributes that many people admire. When children are asked what they want to be when they grow up they could say they want to be a great athlete and possibly name one of the great athletes in history today. In such a situation, the athlete is a hero and also a role model because you look upon him to shape up your passion and talent.
If we look back in history, heroes are people who have great achievements. There are several factors that lead to one being heroic. In most cases, it is the way someone behaves or acts in certain circumstances. In situations like war, they are the people who have gone out of their way despite major obstacles and made great sacrifices for their country. Nelson Mandela is a great example of an individual who fought tirelessly for freedom and democracy in his country. Nelson Mandela is now a hero and role model to many upcoming leaders and those already in leadership positions.
Children also have superheroes that they look up to. Superheroes are known to have superficial powers like flying. Super man and batman are examples of superheroes. Superheroes are admired because they have extraordinary powers like flying, bravery and strength. Children also look up to their parents as heroes. Parents go along away to make sure their children are comfortable, secure and happy. They sacrifice their time and love for their children. Without parents, children miss parental care hence they sometimes suffer neglect, abuse and exploitation. Parent’s professions influence family member’s career decisions. It is not unusual to find children taking up their parents professions. Professions like medicine and teaching often run in the family.
Heroes are generally people whom we admire. Anti-heroes are people who try to harm others, while true heroes are people who strive to bring goodness to our world.
What are the qualities of true heroes? Here are some to consider . . .
• strength and/or stamina
• bravery (willingness to risk one’s own safety to help others)
• independence (the willingness to do what is right despite opposition)
• intelligence (the ability to notice what is needed)
• wisdom (the ability to make good judgment calls)
Write an essay about a hero in a novel or someone from real life.
For help in choosing a hero, click HERE .
Once you’ve chosen your hero, you may follow this outline . . .
Paragraph One: Introduction
Paragraph Two: Describe one quality of your hero
Paragraph Three: Describe another quality of your hero
Paragraph Four: Describe a third quality of your hero, the most important quality
Paragraph Five: Conclusion
Here is a more detailed outline for an essay on a hero:
People talk about heroes. People admire all sorts of traits. But what are the qualities of a real hero? What are the qualities of someone who actually does good in this world? In my mind, there are three main ones: ___________ , ___________ and _________________ . And to my mind, ____________ is a person who portrays all these qualities.
____________ is the first quality that is shown by _________ , (next tell how you know this person; e.g.. ‘my best friend’, ‘a Canadian athlete’, ‘the main character in the novel Shiloh by P.R. Naylor’) _____________. (Now describe how that quality is shown in 3 to 5 sentences.) ________________________
_____________is another quality of _________ . (Describe how it is shown.) ____________
The most important quality of this hero, though, is ________________ . (Describe how it is shown. ) __________________
___________________ is, in my mind, a true hero. (Pronoun) _______ clearly shows the qualities of ___________, _______________ and ________________ . (Add a memorable and emotive concluding sentence.) ______________
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• completed within time-limit 0 1 2
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• accurate spelling and grammar 1 2 3
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An example by Saniya in grade eight:
Many people have been heroes during times of war and many novels depict people with heroic behavior. Iqbal Masih in Iqbal: A Novel by Francesco D’adamo (Simon and Schuster Children’s Publishing Division, 2001) is one of those admirable characters.
Iqbal definitely shows compassion. He runs away from his master’s, Hussain Khan’s, carpet factory and has multiple options to regain his long deserved freedom and lost childhood. He can go back home, run away to another city and start over, or even find a job at the marketplace and try to blend in, but no; Iqbal has concern for his fellow labourers back at the carpet factory and chooses to draw attention to himself – sacrificing his chance at freedom – to ” help [himself] and his friend[s]” (72). So he goes to some police officers and reports his cruel master which ends up backfiring and getting him sent to the tomb – a traumatizing hot creepy dark place full of spiders and scorpions- for six days. Still, he has no regrets on ending up bonded after trying to help his friends. The next spring, after finally accomplishing his goal of freeing Hussain’s bonded labourers, his waterfall of compassion continues flooding Lahore. He makes a solemn declaration that despite his new freedom, and although he can do anything he pleases, he “want[s] to stay and help… free all the children in Pakistan” (91).
Iqbal shows responsibility. He has a great capability to remain calm and collected despite the hatred he has against Hussain, “The only one who remain[s] untouched by Hussain’s storm of hatred [is Iqbal]” (38).
Iqbal also shows perseverance. He tries to explain to his fellow labourers that their debt will never be erased and although they do not believe him, eventually due to his persistence, the reality faces them. Also, the first time Iqbal rebels against Hussain Khan, he is sent to the Tomb for three suffering days. This doesn’t faze him, though. His perseverance encourages him to run away from the carpet factory. When he goes on his adventure after running away for the first time, he discovers that labour is not right and that he and his friends should be freed. After he tries to get help for his factory members and fails, he still does not give up. His persistence encourages him to run away for a second time and find the anti-bondage labour activists. Eventually Iqbal’s astounding perseverance pays off and he manages to free himself, his fellow labourers, and many other bonded labourers across Pakistan.
Finally, Iqbal shows courage. It takes a lot of bravery to stand up to so many important and powerful people. He does exactly that with Hussain Khan. Knowing that his master’s capabilities are so high and that he can easily torture him, Iqbal still finds the courage within himself and decides to rebel against his master and succeeds by freeing himself and his friends. Despite his long-waited freedom, this inspiring thirteen-year-old boy decides that he will sacrifice all of the freedom that he has finally gained to help free other child labourers. Knowing that each time he invades a carpet factory, he is holding his life in his hands, he still goes willingly. As you can see, Iqbal is very courageous.
Iqbal Masih, in Iqbal: A Novel shows all these admirable traits common to heroes: compassion, responsibility, perseverance, and courage. Whether in times of peace or times of war, Iqbal Masih is an inspirational humanitarian who will be remembered forever.
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